Hi,

I want to put this text on my website. So it should be fluent without any problem. Please someone who speaks English as his first language edits this text, correct its punctuation, cast its sentences鈥? To put in a nutshell, do any changes that seems to be needed.

In advance, I thank you for your generous time

MY TEXT:

Direct service results cheaper and more reliable service. At present several online web hosting providers are working as sub-partners of BraveNet. In other words, they resell this service to people in more expensive cost. By omitting intermediates, here you have this chance to obtain this service directly, cheaper and more reliable.

Direct service results in cheaper and more reliable service. At the present time several online web hosting providers are working as sub-partners of BraveNet. In other words, they resell this service to customers at a higher price. By omitting intermediates you have an opportunity to obtain this more reliable service directly and cheaper than others.

......results IN cheaper....

AT A more expensive cost.....

INTERMIDIARIES here.you have A chance( 2 this's not good)

more RELIABLY.....

otherwise well done!